要越难越好的英语叙事作文，12句以上就可以了

这一篇可能质量差点，但是应该可以帮你 真正的文章是自己写的，你把自己想的汉语用英语表现出来就好了，要想英语的进步还是要靠自己多写·多查·多读。

这一篇《雪》。

希望你自己改动，删减(x写的太长)，雪可以改成记叙文，说不定你能由此写出更好的文章。

The Shoes My mother usually are busy, no one inside was not too busy the past few days, but back home she will be busy to do this and that, no free time, but also in their lives and show concern for my learning . On one occasion, the weather has turned warm, the original repulsive thermal wear shoes that are tired of single shoes not to wear a small. Mom raised me to buy a pair of larger shoes. Mom always agreed to my request, that is, there is no time for me to buy shoes. Nothing I can do. On this day, my mother came back from work earlier than usual to see I have to go home after school, said: Xiaoli, eat dinner, I will take you to buy shoes! Good, good mother! Said, two of us hurried dinner. Eat dinner, my mother settled down to go on to take me off We are two people to the streets, while away while watching. At this time, I saw a roadside shops, is a store specifically to buy shoes. On the night,I told my mother. Mother took me to go inside. I see there are a pair of shoes I disdain. I shook his head, went out. Mom took me to continue to move forward. Came to the second shoe shop. Her mother a pair of eyes, I feel satisfied with sitting on the edge of the bench to try to wear again. Alas, this is too small pairs of shoes, clothing feet get hurt. Asked the shop owner asked, he said that this type of the double greatest. I had also followed her mother went out. Mother encouraged me, said: Son, it does not matter, there are a lot of shops can buy. Mom also took me to several other shops turn a switch. Is not a style not to one"s liking, that is, the size is inappropriate, Alas, a pair of shoes is so difficult. I too feel that there are some tired, then see the mother or confidence, so I had to follow her mother to continue to move forward. Walk more than a dozen stores, I still did not get my favorite shoes. I saw almost the whole street to go over, shops will also be emptied. How do? Mother said: go, and then take a look at the past!The god really pays off, I am in the final of a store and I buy a pair of shoes like her mother. At this time, we have visited in the streets more than two hours, and has come to a little over 9:00, and many stores have closed the shop. From time to buy shoes, I realized that the mother really hurts me!

请各位帮我写一篇英语作文，要求如下 字数120～150 以生活与美为主题写一篇记叙文

开头万能公式：

【优美句子第1句】： 开头万能公式一：名人名言 有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办

尤其是英语名言

”，很好办：编

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦

而且没准将来我们就是名人呢

对吧

经典句型： A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言） It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言） 更多经典句型： As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

【优美句子第2句】： 开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。

所以不妨试用下面的句型： According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型： A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招 结尾万能公式：

【优美句子第1句】： 结尾万能公式一：如此结论 说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。

也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了

比如下面的例子： Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了

更多过渡短语： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

【优美句子第2句】： 结尾万能公式二：如此建议 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。

拽

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢

2 英语写作万能公式 更多句型： Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 写作绝招 写作的“七项基本原则”： 一、 长 短 句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人

写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。

而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉

牢记

强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉

文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主 题 句原则 国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。

否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感

相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂

不知所云

所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 三、 一 二 三原则 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。

可毕竟还是条理清楚。

考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。

破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗） 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗） 3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗） 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况） 3 英语写作万能公式 建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚

四、 短语优先原则 写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。

相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。

其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办

用短语是一个办法

比如： I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、 多实少虚原则 原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。

这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。

我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。

比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。

再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩

六、 多变句式原则 1）加法（串联） 都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。

比如说： I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）转折（拐弯抹角） 批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。

所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语： despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3）因果（so, so, so） 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。

其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系

The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4 英语写作万能公式 4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重） 有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。

文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。

其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分： When to go, Why he goes away… 5）附加（多此一举） 如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句） 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏） 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可

七、 挑战极限原则 既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。

比如： The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪

写作绝招 文章主体段落三大杀手锏： 一、举实例 思维短路，举实例

提出一个观点，举实例

提出一个方案，举实例

而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子

5 英语写作万能公式 Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast 更多句型： To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example 二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。

下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … 这个对 compare and contrast 题型很有用 三、换言之 没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复

下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子： I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler

关于成长中的幸福时刻的英语作文 要求是记叙文 100字左右就可以~!

One day my mother asked me, What is happiness? I without hesitation said, . Mom smiled, and said that I said was the truth, becae the kids like to the best and told me to Chu Mingtang have a happy.I think thin, living in the many scenes will emerge in front of ... ...Mother gave me a report of a table tennis class, I could not even started the ball will then do not live, even if the play is also caught in bounds, but I have high, thin the seedlings coaches around hard training, progress very fast, the ball jt like and I made friends, it is difficult to separate combatants spar with the coach"s record by a few to a dozen, but also to the dozens, and also learned to play the standard posture. Now think about it, that go beyond self, to overcome the feeling of self is really very happy.At first, I learned to swim, the coaches taught only breaststroke, then I want to learn freestyle, will be pondering in the pool opened, at the outset to imitate others, arm will move the legs, I do not know how they move, up and down a total lack of coordination, reminded me of careful observation, I found that freestyle, a lot of people beat their feet under the water, a bit like a small duck, I"ll try to shoot the water, and indeed much more relaxed, since then every swimming pool, I have consciously practice freestyle, gradually also have look like. Yes, t is really through the self-study and to gain something people feel very happy.While the happy time really flies, but it let me understand many principles, playing Chuming Tang will have a happy feeling really memorable.一天妈妈问我，“幸福是什么

”我不假思索地说，“玩。

”妈妈笑了，说我说的是心里话，因为小孩最喜欢玩了，并告诉我玩出名堂就有了幸福。

我细细想着，生活中许多场景便在眼前浮现…… 妈妈给我报了个乒乓球班，刚开始我连球也接不住，就算接住了也打出界外，但我在高高的、瘦瘦的苗教练身边刻苦锻炼，进步非常快，球就像和我交了朋友，很难分开，与教练的对打纪录由几个到十几个，又到几十个，并且还学会了标准打球姿势。

现在想来，这种超越自我、战胜自我的感觉真的很幸福。

原先我学过游泳，教练只教我们蛙泳，后来我想学自由泳，便在泳池里琢磨开了，一开始模仿别人，胳膊会动了，脚又不知怎么动，上下总不协调，爸爸提醒我仔细观察，我发现自由泳时，很多人的脚上下拍水，有点像小鸭子，我就尝试拍水，果然轻松多了，从那以后每到游泳馆，我都自觉练习自由泳，渐渐地，也有了模样。

是的，这种通过自学而有所收获真的让人感到很幸福。

求5篇英语作文，是要记叙文急

A TRIP TO the COUNTRY 乡村游记 One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him. While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful). When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door. 有一个星期日,我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历.她吩咐我要好好照料他.当我们沿着道路行走的时候,太阳灿烂地照耀着,微风轻轻地吹着.我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着,并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲,风景实十分美丽. 当我们感觉到疲倦的时候,我们就回家了.我们看见母样正在门口等候我们. MY BIRTHDAY 我的生日 Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world.Time passed quickly. In a twinkling, the clock on the wall struck nine. We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another. 昨天是我生日,所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼.母亲给我准备一个茶会.我邀请他们都前来参加.茶会下午六点半开始.有冷饮和点心.我们又吃又谈又笑.我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人.时间过得很快.转瞬间,墙上的钟敲九点了.我们不得不互道再见. MY DAILY LIFE 我的日常生活 Though my daily life is extremely monotonous, I try hard to adapt myself to it. Why? Because I intend to be a good student. I wish to render service to my country. I get up at six o’clock every day. After I wash my face and brush

求篇大学英语作文。

要记叙文

250字以上。

要有事情完整的事情的叙述……

My first stay at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl. 我独自在家的第一次入住是难忘的。

当我12岁，曾经是我的父亲和母亲都出差去了，我已经两天全部由自己。

我的父母早早离开的第一天，我起床后不久，他们离开。

在第一天晚上，我有点害怕，所以我对所有的灯打开。

其实我一直在我的卧室里的灯亮了整整一夜。

怕起床晚，第二天早上，我把我的床附近三个闹钟，并分别设置在6:00，6:10，和6点15分报警。

为了证明，我能照顾好自己，我洗自己的衣服，第二天下午，虽然我可以等待母亲做。

我真的觉得自己感到自豪，并认为我是一个大女孩。

英语作文记叙文:一件难忘的事情,以第一人称叙述,不少于230词 帮帮忙，考试复习急需，谢谢啦～

最难忘的一件事在我成长的过程中,发生过许许多多令我难忘的事.其中有一件事最使我难以忘怀.　　记得在我读三年级时的一个晚上,老师布置了很多作业,令我非常郁闷.老师在布置有什么作业时我的思想正在开小差,所以忽略了其中的一份作业.那一天的作业很快就被我做完了.这时的我非常高兴,也觉的非常的累,于是就出门去逛逛.经过同学家时,我看见还有很多同学还在书桌上做作业.同学们的父母看到我这么早就出来游玩,他们都很惊讶我如何能这么快就做完了作业.我很骄傲地抬起头,对他们说：“我确实是做完作业了!” 　　第二天早上,我去上学了.到了学校,组长叫我把作业拿出来,我听他的话把所有的作业都拿了出来,组长叫我拿出最后一件,我非常惊讶,不是只有四件吗?组长神气的说：“当然不是了,一共有五件你漏了一件.”组长立马跑去跟老师说.老师听了非常生气,马上走了过来,叫我去窗扉边把作业补完整.那时同学们都在笑我说：“哈哈哈哈,都是你自己上课时开小差忘了作业,你才会被老师责罚.哈哈哈哈~.”那时我就觉得我自己非常委屈.我想：这事不怪别人,都怪我自己,是我自己上课不认真听老师讲,才造成今天的错误.我走回座位,把作业补完以后给了老师检查,老师检查了后我下定决心,以后一定要认真听老师讲课不要像现在一样被老师责罚.　　每当想起这件事,我就后悔极了.它教育了我今后上课听讲要全神贯注,作业要一丝不苟,学习要脚踏实地.